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This is the new composition you have to produce, remember?
Write a letter to a newspaper giving your opinion about something you saw on TV last week. Remember to use the linkers we learnt yesterday and different paragraphs.
Deadline is next Tuesday 30th April.
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Dear Journalist,
ResponderEliminarI am writing in response to the documentary about global warming, which appeared on TV last night.
Firstly, I think that making things for the environment is a waste of time because while some people is recyling another people is throwing cans to the sea.Furthermore, the ozone layer is broken and we cannot repare it.
Next,some people said that is impossible to tell all the people to recycle and to look after their acts.Other people tell me that is imposible not to pollute.Nevertheless, we can make the hole not to grow more because at one year it will be broken and life in the Earth will dissappear.
Finally,many people said that they recycle thier rubbish. However
,other people do not separate plastic,glass and paper.What´s more, I want to say that your documentary wasn´t complete because you did not talk abut floods, droughts and also about the greenhouse effect.
I will be interested in your opinion and I also want to see your next documentary .
Yours faithfully,
Ines Martinez,Madrid
Dear Journalist,
ResponderEliminarI am writing in response to the documentary about animals, which appeared on TV last afternoon.
At first, I that all of the thinhs that the hunters do with the lions is terrible, because while some people is trying to have the animals alive another people is killing them.Furthermore, some species of animal are extinguis .
Next,some people said that is impossible to tell all the people to dont kill animals .Other people tell that is imposible not to have all of them alive. Nevertheless, we can make it giving them food in a good state or taking to prision people that kill this types of animals.
Finally,many people said that animals like lions are so dangerous and this is the rison why they kill. However ,other people said that we have to take them alive to expand their raze. I will be interesting to see an other documentary saying that kins of things .
yours fainthfully
Rubén Rubio Urbanos
Dear journalist, I am writing in response to a TV programme which I saw last night.The programme is called The Big Bang Theory.
ResponderEliminarFirstly I think that is a silly programme never the less it was great for one afternoon in which I didn´t wanted to do anything except watching TV at home lying on the sofa.
Next, some people such as my brother´s friends or my mother´s ones said that was the funnyest programme on the world and that they can not stop laughing at it and when they said that to me I got surprised because it isn`t that fun for my opinion.
However I don`t want this programmes to dissapeared because they are ok for sometimes and it is a good thing to watch so, I want to continuous watching them although I don`t love them.
Yours faithfully.
Ruth Calzada; Valdemoro, Madrid.
Dear journalist,
ResponderEliminarI am writing in response to a TV programme about rhinos that I saw last night.
Firstly I´m going to say that I don´t like the things that they are doing, they are hunting and taking its horns.Furthermore, the black rhinos is going to dissapear in 15 years if they continue like this.
Next,some people said that s impossible to save one specie but in 1960s the white rhinos were saved by one person, and nowadays they are 18.000 of white rhinos.Nevertheless this is a hardwork now that some people don´t have a job.
Finally,some people said that the rhinos are dangerous and this is the reason because they don´t do nothing. I thing the rhino is a very beautiful specie and we have to saveit of ilegal hunters.
Yours faithfully
Santiago Moreno;Valdemoro, Madrid
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ResponderEliminarDear journalist,
ResponderEliminarIam writing in response to a TV progamme abaut la que se avecina that I saw yesterday.
fistly I´m going to say that I don´t like some things that they do not very good thins but rarely buy I like very much and is fun.
Next,me I think taht the peolple who make the series like la que se avecina the can make another programme and if they can do better the peolple they are going to see always.
Finally,some peolple think that it is a bad series but the most of the peolple think thet it is the better programme in the world.
Yours faithfully
Lucia Fernandez 1A
Dear Journalist:
ResponderEliminarI am writing because yesterday I saw a very problematic advert on TV.
I was watching the Explora channel when suddenly and advert appears on this channel and It wasn´t a good advert.
Firstly, in the advert appears people shouting, and from my point of view it is not good for children.Furthermore children can copy this advert and it isn´t good too.
Then in the advert appears a heart operation and children can be scared of this thing.Nevertheless they like this thing but not as much as in the advert.
Finally, the advert was about a shop in Madrid about a chemist´s shop¡¡¡¡ I didn´t understand the advert.
I would like to receive people´s opinion.
Yours faithfully,
Eduardo Fernández, Valdemoro (Madrid)
Dear journalist,
ResponderEliminarI am writing in response to a TV programme that I saw last day. It was about the environment
Firstly, I want to say that is was very informative and interesting. However some information wasn´t true, for example they said that burning rubbish is something bad for the environment, but it is not, if we burn more rubbish, we will generate more energy.
I think that this programmes are very good, but if so many people don´t watch it, they won´t know what is happening around the world. Furthermore, if only one person recycle is not enough.
Finally, they said that recycling is good, but is a lot to be separating all time all things that are necessary...
I want to know about your opinions,
Yours faithfully,
Cristina Lopez
Dear journalist,
ResponderEliminarI´m writing in response to a TV programme that I saw last week.
It was about psychopaths around the world.
What they said about them was that they are also call assasins.
However when the police catch them it doesn´t happens the same same in all the countrys, I´m going to give you a example in the USA the police can shoot them if they think they are dangerous but here in Spain it is forbiden also for the police to shoot anyone.
Another important thing was how the justice works for psychopaths in the different countries another example is that in the USA it is allow the death sentence, what I opine about that is that if the psychopath has done a very horrible thing I agree but for example if you do it by accident, so I agree depending on the case.
I suppose people will opine about this.
Yours faithfully,
Sergio Sanchez
Dear Journalist:
ResponderEliminarMy name is Javier Gonzalez and I wanted to talk about a new programme at Tv that is about enviroment and how global warming affects all the earth.
Firstly I like these programmes because they tell us a lot of things that we usually do and that are bad for our enviroment like wasting water , electricity, etc.
Then they talk how to save resources and other things that we can do for saving the planet and the enviroment.
Finally I would like all people to take care about the big problem we have in the world with this subjet and I invite all to follow these programmes and that Tv channels make more documentaries about this.
Yours faithfully,
Javier Gonzalez.
Dear journalist
ResponderEliminarI´m writting in response to a TV programme that I saw last week it was abut recycling and enviroment
I think the progamme was not very realistic, in the progamme the protagonist was telling that recycling is allways a good thing ,but I think recycling has the same advantages than disvantages
I think the progame is very good , a little bit false but......good, it was informative
I supose people will opine about this
Your faithfully,
Rodrigo Garcia
Dear journalist:
ResponderEliminarI´m writting in response to a tv programme that I saw yesterday,it was Ahora Caigo.
Firstly,in my opinion I like this because is a good programme to desmotrate all the inteligent you are,but if you make a mistake you fell down.
Next,I think that there are many adverts,so the people start to get boring and turn off the tv or they change to another channel.
Finally,I think that the presenter is a very funny person and makes lough.
Also the programme makes you to compite with yourself and with your family.
Your faithfully,
Paola Castillo
hello my name is roberto.
ResponderEliminarIm going to talk about the programe i saw last night.
it was about the life on the sabanna.
first i think it is a good programe beacause it reflects how the animal live,
and also how thwy feets.
Also is a good programe for kids because they can learn many things of animals.
Secondly i want to talk about habitants.The life there is very bad.
They dont have schools or toys to play.
They also dont have water or food.
It is very sad so if we compare with that children we are rich
so dont say that we are poor.
Finally i want to say that the time of programing is too late ,
so if you can put at ten oclock better f.
Also is very short because there are lot of advertisms.
Byeyejgmpt6
roberto
estimated journalist:
ResponderEliminarhas come to talk about a very exciting program I saw the other day, was the recycling and the environment
I think the program was very good although I had one thing I did not understand very well, they said that the animals are not affected, I do not agree because we are destroying polar caps and in animals there.
Still I think the program is very good and I recommend everyone to see it because it is very entertaining and learn many things
finally when you we see I want an opinion and tell if you like
RAUL JIMENEZ MARTIN